Step On Your Shimmering Path.

Goldfinch60



Take a moment to breathe the gentle air,

Let troubles drift away,

Release your silent care within your heart.

Find what truly stays and matters,

Treasured faces, love that never strays.

Let any the worries tumble as they may,

Trust the dawn to brighten every day.

Step by step let hope and calm entwine,

And soon your path will shimmer,

And all will be clear and fine.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 21st, 2026 02:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: Look to the future, the past has gone.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 27
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.

  • sorenbarrett

    A poem that reminds me that we need to assess our priorities and rest from unneeded pursuits that take too much of our time and effort. Well said Andy

    • Goldfinch60

      Much appreciated soren, thank you.

      Andy

    • Doggerel Dave

      Breathe in through your nose to the count of three; hold for three; out through your mouth to the count of three. Repeat. Now you are ready for the visualisation. And yes Andy, it's there.

      • Goldfinch60

        Very true Dave, breathing that way is important to relax our minds. Thank you.

        Andy



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