Way Up There

Teddy.15

 
Stop whatever you are doing 
 
stop and stare for a while
 
up at the great moon 
 
gliding there in the sky
 
in nature's great picture 
 
as night stars flare
 
don't you sometimes wish 
 
that you too, were up there?
 
 
 
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  • sorenbarrett

    A beautiful picture projected right before us for free. One of the last free things but they are doing their best to dim it with light pollution. A wonderful read my friend I'll be there soon enough

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you dearest sorrenbarret 🌹

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome my friend

      • Poetic Licence

        A lovely write, I along with many others no doubt, do wish I could up there and see the beauty close up, enjoyed the read

        • Teddy.15

          So truly wonderful to see you, and thank you so much for coming by to share your lovely thoughts. Wow sitting on the moon, surrounded by twinkling stars. 🌹

          • Poetic Licence

            Your welcome

          • Goldfinch60

            I always look at the moon Teddy, as it brings peace within me.

            Andy

            • Teddy.15

              It surely does dear Andy. 🌝

            • spilleronsheet

              Such wonderful lines, i usually get lost in the sky…keep penning dear teddy

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you my dear Spills. 🌹

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Dearest Teddy, this is simple in the best way…an invitation to pause and look up. There’s something earnest and childlike about it...and that truly works. Ending on “that you too, were up there?” keeps that sense of wonder open. Powerful poem, dear poet.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

                • Teddy.15

                  That's so kind dear Tristan thank you, sometimes my younger self appears in my writing. 💜

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    That is an awesome thing, my friend, to be able to tap into that. A powerful gift, indeed. Most welcome, dear Teddy.

                  • NafisaSB

                    I think I am better off down here- able to appreciate it’s beauty though I see and laud your sentiments 👌👏👍

                    • Teddy.15

                      🤣 I'd love to be closer to the stars at least for one night, thank you dear NafisaSB 🌹

                      • NafisaSB

                        I WISH YOUR DREAMS COME TRUE - IN YOUR IMAGINATION UNTIL YOU BECOME AN ASTRONAUT AND GO LAND ON THE MOON ..
                        BEAUTIFUL WISH THOUGH AND I HOPE YOU FEEL IT COME TRUE...



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