I taste your breath
A trilogy of wine partaken
Edges of crusty bread
Shredded Romano
They feed me as you
With your intricacies
Light pivots on a chest
Of jewels
Regal in all eternities
A bliss that blows
As a harbor’s gale
A drop of you for my thirst
An inch of you for my repair
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Author:
Katie B. (
Offline) - Published: March 3rd, 2026 03:23
- Category: Love
- Views: 27
- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
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Comments3
This poem captures the imagination and pulls it to dark reaches. A sacrament the very idea shakes the soul when thought about. A romantic cannibalism of love. Yet is this not all religion where we worship our love making them our 'God. We eat their flesh and drink their blood with each kiss. A fave
Thank you Soren for your gracious feedback. Thank you for your fave as well, that is an honor coming from you.
You are most welcome Katie a pleasure
Wonderful poem on love for all Katie.
Andy
The song depicts love as an act of nourishment and healing, where body and soul merge in a sensual, almost ritualistic experience that oscillates between tenderness and elemental strength. Expertly written!
Thank you so much for your thoughtful review and generous comments. Blessings!!
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