Can’t, can’t’ can’t, can’t.
Cannot, cannot, cannot.
Can, can, can, can.
Can’t, cannot, can.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 8th, 2026 02:09
- Comment from author about the poem: This came to me overnight, I just couldn't get the timing out of my mind.
- Category: Reflection
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Best you go for another kip, kip, kip, Andy
(For anyone unfamiliar with British vernacular, 'kip' means sleep)
Is this a modern version of The Power of Positive Thinking Streamlined for modern consumption?
Thanks for the vid., So June CC wrote that for Jonny C...Well he certainly did it justice!
Okay, okay,okay Dave |I will go for another kip.
Yes June wrote a few songs for Johnny, I have all of Johnny Cash's albums.
Andy
I cannot say this is not a good write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
Well Andy this is in character with your positive mind frame always ending on a positive. Indeed it is our choice in this life to choose where we put periods or end lines and why not end on a positive. Lovey my friend
Most kind soren, thank you.
Andy
You are most welcome Andy
if the will to do is there, all the 'cannots' can be turned to 'cans' - short but targets the issue...
Very true Nafisa, Thank you. Yes we can.
Andy
that's the spirit - glad to see the optimism...
Nicely done. A fine write.
Thank you Tom.
Andy
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