bird of paradise
arriving into spring-light
bursting in colour
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: March 25th, 2026 04:15
- Category: Haiku
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Tristan Robert Lange, MendedFences27, NafisaSB
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Comments5
This poem has dual meaning as a haiku it is as rare as the bird or plant both with wonderful color and either working so well. I have never seen the bird that you picture so grandly in the poem but I have the flowers that in their tropical beauty are as grand. A relation to heliconia which grow wild here in Brazil in flaming red the bird of paradise with its orange, yellow and blue have blooms that last for weeks on the stem. A lovely write my friend
Thank you my dear friend for such a lovely review. 🌹
You are most welcome my friend
Beautiful. Here's to Spring, dearest Teddy! Glad it's arrived! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Let's hope so my dear Tristan thank you. 🌹
Hi Teddy. A beautiful poem and painting. A duet of art. Together they make a colorful arrival and linger in the mind and eyes. I have to fav this one. - Phil A.
Hello my dear. Phil, lovely to see you, thank you so much for your kind words. 🌹
May that colour be with you throughout your life Teddy.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy, I hope so too my friend, and I hope the same for you and Mary
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wow - what a beautiful picture and in just 10 words you have brought out all the beauty that spring foretells - good work
Thank you so much dear NafisaSB 🌹
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