A tepid sky
Ignites
Omnipotent skies-
Ominous clouds
A yellow
Harvest erupts
Electric,
Fast-paced strikes
Lighting up daunting
Burdens we bury
Emblazoned
Furious nights
Sky’s
Drama abates
Renewal
Comes crawling and
Stars
Remember to shine
So goes our storms
So goes our light
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Author:
Katie B. (
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Comments6
Nature is such and a great metaphor with splendid imagery "a yellow harvest erupts" what a great expression of the lightning. Loved the poem Katie a fave
Thank you for your fine review. Isn't poetry the greatest form of self expression.
You are most welcome Katie for me it is
So meaningful!!
Thank you for your kind comments!
Good write K.
Katie, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet intensity running through it that never lets go. It moves like a storm you feel before you fully see it…steady, building, then easing just enough to breathe again. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you as always for your kind comments. Your words are much appreciated. Thanks for all the inspiration.
I love the rhythm of it, the short bursts of words (most lines 1 - 3 syllables), the galloping feel to it (if you will). Especially like
Sky’s
Drama abates
Renewal
Comes crawling and
Stars
Remember to shine
Thank you so much for your kind review.
Thank you so very much for your kind comments. your review is much appreciated.
May the light always be with you Katie.
Andy
Thank you so much for your kind comment, Andy
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