An Ode to the Great Moon

Teddy.15

 
 
night time's orchestra 
 

moon shining on all the world 

 
as it slowly turns
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  • sorenbarrett

    Beautiful haiku Teddy it takes a look from three levels at nature sound, vision, motion. Loved it

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you dear sorrenbarret 🌹

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Teddy

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Teddy, “night time’s orchestra” stands out… that phrase carries sound, motion, and atmosphere all at once. It sets the tone perfectly from the start. Well done, dearest friend. This haiku's music comes through! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you so much dear Tristan, I am humbled my friend 🌹

        • Goldfinch60

          The moon brings such joy to me when I see its fullness. Fine words Teddy.

          Andy

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you dear Andy. 🌹

          • NafisaSB

            Short , sweet and a perfect ode to the moon 🌕

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you sweet NafisaSB 🌹

              • NafisaSB

                Most welcome 🤗
                Have a good day 💅

              • Kevin Hulme

                Always loved looking at the Moon. Especially when it's glow turns the Country-Side a tinge of Blue. It's something the whole World can share in. And Free. Nice one.

                • Teddy.15

                  She is certainly a beauty worldwide. Thanks again for coming by to my Haiku series, very kind of you. 🌹



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