rain pours from dark clouds
rainbow born in sky's splendour
as sun's broken through
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: March 28th, 2026 03:59
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 41
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Comments4
Not only meets the formalities of a haiku but has a splendid set of images and also sends a metaphoric message of a promise very nicely done Teddy a fave
Thank you so much dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
Most welcome my friend
That picture is serene...and no, not the actual picture (though it is); rather, the picture painted by your lovely haiku, dearest Teddy.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you Dear Tristan for your support of my scribbles ❤️
May the sun always be in your life Teddy.
Andy
Thank you dearest Andy. 🌹
Nice write. I like how short and sweet it is with a good pic.
Thank you so much 🌹
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