the fade

arqios

whence there was a love
but no language between you
now mem'ries remain

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  • sorenbarrett

    Clever and creative Cryptic this senryu speaks for itself

    • arqios

      Scary when it’s plain! Thanks for validating this, dear friend πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome my friend

      • Friendship

        Nicely done

        • arqios

          Thank you dear Friendship πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

          • Friendship

            Welcome

          • orchidee

            Good write A.

            • arqios

              Thank you O.

            • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

              nice piece that speaks freely

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              arqios, this is simple but it lands deep…love without a shared language, and then only memory left holding it together. Quiet, but it carries. Beautifully done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

              • arqios

                Thanks, Tittu, there's quite more to love than the catalogued 5 languages, it seems. πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

              • Cerise456

                Beautifully written

                • arqios

                  Thank you, Cerise456. Most appreciated πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

                • David Wakeling

                  A sad view of the human condition here amigo.A guess we have to battle through

                  • arqios

                    And we do, it can be discerned and observed all around us, resilient to a fault. Thanks amigo πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

                  • Kevin Hulme

                    The Cozy Duvet Cover of Happy Memories.
                    A nice little Write.

                    • arqios

                      Indeed, Kevin, where the weather isn't too harsh πŸ€©πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Clever senryu Rik.

                      Andy

                      • arqios

                        Thanks so much. Andy πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

                      • Salvia.S

                        Absolutely loved it ❀️ Beautifully written!!!!

                        • arqios

                          Many thanks dear Salvia πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ



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