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  sorenbarrett May 27th, 2026 07:32

  Very beautiful this short poem that speaks of redemption. Well done

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    arqiosMay 27th, 2026 07:54

    Thanks Soren, redeeming is so valuable 🙏🏻🕊️

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    sorenbarrettMay 27th, 2026 08:52

    You are most welcome Cryptic

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  nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) May 27th, 2026 10:32

  good write

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    arqiosMay 27th, 2026 15:08

    Thanks friend 🙏🏻🕊️

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  orchidee May 27th, 2026 14:19

  Good write A. Goodbye - I'm not staying! lol.

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    arqiosMay 27th, 2026 15:09

    lol, thanks O 🙏🏻🕊️
    be that way 🤣

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    orchideeMay 28th, 2026 01:19

    I'm going off in a huff! lol. 🙂

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    arqiosMay 28th, 2026 03:09

    Just remember; they that huff end up puffing 😂

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  Kevin Hulme May 27th, 2026 19:16

  Brevity is the Soul of Wit.

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    arqiosMay 27th, 2026 19:45

    Sure is, mate! Thanks, K🙏🕊️

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  Tristan Robert Lange May 27th, 2026 21:55

  Arqios, this is delicate and quietly intimate...a whisper someone leaves behind in place of a declaration. There’s a softness to the longing here that makes the brevity work beautifully. Lovely piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

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    arqiosMay 28th, 2026 05:38

    Thanks, Tittu. That is good to know what works and how. Much appreciated 🙏🕊️

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  David Wakeling May 27th, 2026 23:53

  A beautiful song and poem.Takes my breathe away.Cleverly created compadre

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    arqiosMay 28th, 2026 05:41

    Was that the first Top Gun where the song was featured? Memory doesn't always serve.🙏🕊️

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    David WakelingMay 28th, 2026 18:55

    Yes Top Gun 1986 Take my breathe away Berlin best song award

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  Goldfinch60 May 28th, 2026 01:27

  May that soul be forever there Rik.
  
  Andy

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    arqiosMay 28th, 2026 05:41

    Amen. Thanks, Andy 🙏🕊️