Found a cavity in my tooth
Never would’ve believed it without proof
Well gee guess I missed some spots
I really can’t wait for all those shots
Better eat more vegetables instead of all that ice cream
Then it wouldn’t be as much as my fault as it might seem
Gotta call the dentist and let them hear the bad news
Whole office is gonna be filled with depressing blues
Found that darn cavity in my tooth
Sure didn’t want to believe it was the truth
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Cheesencrackers (Pseudonym) (
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Cute and full of bad memories of the dentist. A fun read written so well in a playful manner. Loved it
Thank you for the read Soren! I’m really glad you enjoyed it
You are most welcome
No bad news for the dentist...
Hah that is true, after all they’re making money!
Allie, this made me smile…there’s such a light, honest humor running through it. It doesn’t try to be anything more than what it is, and that’s exactly why it works. That little spiral from disbelief to acceptance feels so real. Fun piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
I’m really glad you enjoyed this Tristan! Your feedback means a lot to me!
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