I FELT SORRY

Michael Edwards

 

I FELT SORRY

 

I felt sorry for the tetrapod vertebrate

when I was informed of the poor creatures fate

for it seems he's lost his powers of seduction

having contracted reptile dysfunction.

 

 

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  • Friendship

    Well written. Your poem humorously addresses the concept of "reptile dysfunction," which serves as a metaphor for loss of vitality and desirability in life. It highlights the fragility of life and attraction through a whimsical take on the struggles of a fictional "tetrapod vertebrate.

    • Michael Edwards

      Thank you sp much - I do appreciate your kind comments as I do with those of all the 'regulars' - it makes the posting so worthwhile. - I feel so guilty that I don't have time to post in depth reviews of others but i do my best.

    • sorenbarrett

      I love this play on words on a day that promotes tom foolery. A fun read Michael and a fave By the way I wonder if this fossil has a hard on.

      • Michael Edwards

        He's a big softy - 😂😂

        • sorenbarrett

          No wonder he is no longer around



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