I FELT SORRY
I felt sorry for the tetrapod vertebrate
when I was informed of the poor creatures fate
for it seems he's lost his powers of seduction
having contracted reptile dysfunction.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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Well written. Your poem humorously addresses the concept of "reptile dysfunction," which serves as a metaphor for loss of vitality and desirability in life. It highlights the fragility of life and attraction through a whimsical take on the struggles of a fictional "tetrapod vertebrate.
Thank you sp much - I do appreciate your kind comments as I do with those of all the 'regulars' - it makes the posting so worthwhile. - I feel so guilty that I don't have time to post in depth reviews of others but i do my best.
I love this play on words on a day that promotes tom foolery. A fun read Michael and a fave By the way I wonder if this fossil has a hard on.
He's a big softy - 😂😂
No wonder he is no longer around
Good write and pic M.
Michael, this made me laugh…that sharp turn into humor lands clean and unapologetic...just delivers and walks away. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
oh, the poor thing. Mayhap it needs a little soak in the sun. 🙏🕊️
and that is what I have missed all this time
Thanks Michael
Looking forward to catching up take care
Aw thanks for all your commenta - loved them - be posting more soon.
So do I. 😆
Feel sorry or suffer? 😁😁😁😁😁😁👍
Feel sorry. Suffering quietly was inbuilt in me till I decided at this late age to break the shackles and silence
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