Vision

Teddy.15

 
magnificent black
 
roof, flying into twister
 
extraordinary
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  • sorenbarrett

    Now there is a picture of destruction leaving the viewer astonished. A powerful haiku Teddy

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you dear sorrenbarret 🌹

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome my friend

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Dearest Teddy, there’s a sharp, surreal clarity here…that flying roof caught in the twister gives it motion and force, and the whole thing lands like a sudden vision. It’s brief, but it sticks. Powerful metaphor. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you so much, dear Tristan . 🌹

        • Goldfinch60

          Clever haiku Teddy.

          Andy

          • Teddy.15

            Hello my dear Andy, thank you. Happy Easter to you and Mary. 🌹



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