All is you and your soul,
What's left after the storm.
What is you and your soul
Shall keep your heart warm.
Never lose heart in the thunder,
Lightning from you shines brighter.
Let the illumination guide your soul,
May the heart rejoice in whole.
- Salvia.S
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Yay! A new poem! Dearest Salvia, there’s a gentle strength in this…storm and light held together without fear. That line about lightning shining from within anchors it, and the whole piece feels like something meant to steady the heart. I’m grateful for this. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you so much dearest Tittu for the read, feedback and the fave!!! This is my first poem in this year btw.. Thank you so much again for reading this!!!❤️
made me smile... thank you for sharing!
Thank you for the read and feedback ❤️ I'm glad it made you happy!!!
You have been missed, welcome back
Thank you very much ❤️❤️
Good write S.
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Most lovely! Excellent work!
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Salvia you have grown in your absence and so has your poetry. This reads as something from an ancient text of wisdom. In fact the first line is inevitably true. Nothing exists without the body and soul. What is left after the storm? Life is a storm as is each adventure and what we see is what is left destruction or cleansing. What is you and your soul? A question science can not answer the body made of chemicals and atoms but the soul or consciousness no one can explain. Taken as a statement not a question they do keep you warm in the temporal and spiritual way. Never loose heart in the thunder. It is adversity that makes us strong. Lightning from you shines brighter. In overcoming the adversity you shine and gain wisdom therefore light. Let the illumination guide your soul as wisdom will. With all this how can the heart not rejoice. A masterful write with clever rhyme as well a definite fave
Thank you very much for the kind and heartfelt words!!! This means a lot for me... Made me happy... Thanks again for your valuable time, read, feedback and the fave. Much appreciated!!!
You are most welcome
A great emotional poem with a good substantial charge, conveying sincere and deep sense. A fave, my dear!
Thank you very much dear for the read, feedback and the fave ❤️ This means a lot for me ❤️❤️
Fine words Salvia.
Andy
Thank you very much ❤️❤️
A masterpiece that teaches one how to overcome and survive the storm.
Thank you very much for the read and feedback!!! Very much appreciated!!!!
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