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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Priya Tomar, Thomas W Case, Tristan Robert Lange
- In collections: My Raven Collection.
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I am sure the right road is there for you Teddy and all will be wonderful.
Andy
Thank you Dear Andy. Grief has a strange take on what we think or want, time will tell. 🌹
Teddy this poem reflects deep internal emotion. There is a sense of conflict in the waiting and the wishing that it would hurry up. Once it’s poised waiting for a disaster that seems inevitable that has not yet occurred. A very emotive piece
Yes exactly, you have read the very soul of these scribbles dearest sorrenbarret, thank you. 🌹
You are most welcome, Teddy. Have a wonderful day.
Nice description of inner conflict .
Thank you so much 🌹
The weight of waiting seeps from every line—gritty, patient, and real.
There’s tenderness in the ache, a quiet hope fighting the tide.
Yes indeed, we are still waiting, once it's over that's when the tsunami will hit, like every time before, thank you so much dear Thomas for seeing deep within the line. 🌹
Dearest Teddy, this really lands…that waiting, especially with all those emotions sitting together at once, and the way it hasn’t fully come into view yet. That line about the table of distaste stays with me. There’s something deeply honest here. Powerful write and another great inclusion in your Raven Collection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you dearest Tristan. 🌹
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