Problem poetry here abounds -
Poetry purveying bullshit,
Not to mention commentary:
Truth lost In a welter of quit -
Quit reality, an escape;
Focus on the way words attach,
Worry not authenticity,
That poetic feel is the catch…
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Author:
Doggerel Dave (Pseudonym) (
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If this old head is catching the gist of this there are poems and there are rhymes and the two are not necessarily the same. Poetry from the gut with feeling and rhyme from the head with not so much emotion. Ah hell Dave I thought I had it now I'm just rambling. You got me going anyway
Thanks Soren.
You are always most welcome my friend
Dave, this feels like those moments where you read something and know immediately it’s all surface…crafted (possibly) to sound right but missing something underneath. That frustration comes through clearly here, and it’s certainly easy to relate to. It hits a nerve for a reason. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Now lookie here - authenticity is quite a long word if one is tipsy. I can't sshay 'aush-thensh-tis-hetty' Good acting there from Sir Orchi NS, innit?! lol.
Ah, the old bullshit poetry.
If I rush, I can go back and change mine. lol
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