जब तक जीवन है, बोलूँगा
मेरी हो जाओ, कह दूँगा
मेरी बातें जो चूक जाएँ,
तुम कह देना
तेरा रस्ता मैं देख रहा,
साँझ भी अब हो आई है
जब मेरी संध्या ढल जाए,
तुम आ जाना
जब तक बाती है, जलता हूँ,
जो तेल ख़त्म, खो जाऊँगा
जब मेरा दीपक बुझ जाए,
तुम रो लेना
— विमल
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विमल (Pseudonym) (
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This poem carries an eastern feel in its wording. A nicely crafted work of relationship and time.
Vimal, that image of the lamp burning until the oil is gone really caught me. It’s simple, but it carries so much weight…love tied to time, to inevitability. The fading isn’t sudden, it’s lived through. That detail lingers. Well done, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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