Upon the shore where endless waves unfold,
I stroll with thee as dawn ignites the sky;
The salty breeze, the sunlight, blue and gold,
Reflects in laughter, sparkling in thine eye.
Together, footprints etch the shifting sand,
A fleeting mark, yet steadfast as our hearts.
With every tide, we walk hand in hand,
Nature’s sweet chorus playing its own parts.
The gulls above proclaim their morning song,
While distant sails drift gently on the foam.
In silent bliss, where we belong,
The sea becomes our haven, love our home.
So let the winds and waters ever be
Witness to joy, while walking by the sea.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 13th, 2026 00:40
- Comment from author about the poem: We come home today after a wonderful time by the sea.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments7
How long do you stay? I thought you only just got there?! heehee Good write Gold.
We arrived last Wednesday and were the for 5 nights, a great time was had.
Thank you Orchi.
Andy
You won't have seen that prisoner, as he got early parole!
A most beautiful sonnet Andy very nice
Most kind soren, thank you.
Andy
You are most welcome Andy
Welcome back! I seem to be pretty slow on the uptake 🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you Rik, yes we are back home now.
Andy
Most welcome dear friend, and glad of traveling mercies 🕊️🙏
Beautiful! Captures so much! Well done. Nice write, Goldfinch!
So kind Katie, thank you so much.
Andy
An excellent sonnet Andy. One of my favorite pastimes, walking by the sea. My favorite line, "footprints etch the shifting sand." Now you've made me want to go there. Oh, well loved your poem. Phil A.
Very much appreciated Phil, thank you.
Andy
My usual, Andy. Keep up production - no slacking...
Tank you Dave, you did ask for another sonnet.
Andy
A lovely write !..loved the lines -" the sea becomes our haven ,love our home"
So kind thinkerbell, thank you.
Andy
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