Top and bottom sonnet

sorenbarrett

On butterfly wings colors painted
Truth floating shades to eyes tainted
Fluttering hues and patterns imbue
Each a different moth they view

 

Some say black with shades of yellow
To another an orange patterned fellow
Some see lines where others see dots 
Where some view numbers others see spots

 

In flight flittering wings in play
On the ground reversed wings on display
Wind's illusion a spark in the air
Where all observers are right, both colors it does bear

 

Two different viewers that pursuers both see  
In flight or alight, both right, though they may disagree

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  • Katie B.

    Yes, I like it. True of people, our thoughts and opinions. Great imagery as well. Well penned!

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you Katie for the review and comment it is as always most appreciated and valued

    • Priya Tomar

      We interpret same thiing differently .
      Nice poem

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you so much Priya for the read and comment. Yes you are so right

      • arqios

        Right up my reading alley here, Soren. A definite fave 🤩🙏🏻🕊️

      • orchidee

        Good write SB.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you very much Orchi

        • Doggerel Dave

          Yes each brain does its own filling in of detail when it comes to visual perception; now an account still has to me made in relation to testable ideas. Enjoyed the write, Soren.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks so much my friend for the read and kind words have a great day

          • marissa

            You are everything!!You need to take this up as a profession

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you Marissa your words are most encouraging. I have worked with different points of view all my life and as a psychologist they have been my life. Your comment is most appreciated.

            • Jerry Reynolds

              A fine write, Sorenbarrett. Great imagery.

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you Jerry your words mean a lot.

              • Kevin Hulme

                Yes we all see things differently. Different points of View.
                As long as we respect others views and not lead in to War. A Good Poem.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you Kevin for the read and comment it is most appreciated

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Soren, this carries that firm realization that perspective shapes everything…what’s seen in motion, what’s seen at rest, and how both can hold truth at the same time. The image of the wings shifting between views ties it all together in a clean, thoughtful way. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you so much my friend I deeply appreciate your input and interpretation it is what was intended. Much appreciated Tristan

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Fine words soren, we all see things differently.

                    Andy

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thanks so much Andy indeed we all do your words are most appreciated

                    • Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi

                      It’s hard for people to reach each other.

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thanks so much for your reading of this piece and words of comment they are appreciated



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