There is a deadness in my bark that hardens with time
Oil burns low, hope goes dark, fate sealed with past grime
A stunted growth gnarled and old filled with living scars
Branches ensnarled, roots grown cold, above unreachable stars
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But from this life is reborn soren.
Andy
Indeed it is Andy and hardening is not bad in and of itself it can be a protection as well as a barrier. Thank you so much for the read and comment my friend
a very deep message portrayed and enjoyed
Good write SB. I thought you meant Fido's bark. Nothing dead about that. he still barks if poets 'forget' to mark poems 18+ where they should be. lol.
I guess we all suffer the inevitable tempering of life.But it is all part of the mystery.This made me think.Well done compadre
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