Hope the title won't put you off.
Here it is:
A poem
Sshhhhh! (it's a silent poem)
The End!
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What's that 'excuse' for a poem? asks Fido
Well, it might be a Haiku or summit, I reply
And Fido says:
Ahh, a reversal of your normal style:
You using about 5 words when 500 will do
And Fido says to you:
It's old Orchi muckin' about
He means well - just humour him! LOL.
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Author:
orchidee (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A bit of nuttiness! lol.
- Category: Humor
- Views: 33
- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Friendship, arqios, Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
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Comments6
I think the title put everyone off (Haha). This was humorous. Keep writing.
Persistence is key
Thank you F. I could persist in doing some longer poems! lol.
That's what I like about you Orchi you are your own person nothing fake there and there is meaning behind it all and for that a fave
Thank you SB. lol. Thanks for favouring this rubbish. lol.
One man's trash is another man's treasure
OMG, I enjoy your humor; you get a fava for this one.
Thank you F. lol.
Haha! Epic! Indeed! The presentation deserves a Fave for creativity, mate 🕊️🙏
Thank you A. lol.
Welcome A 🕊️🙏
Why people fave this rubbish, and similar rubbish?! lol.
To whom should I address my complaint, this orchidee fellow, or the stray hound with a name, it seems, of Fido?
May I register my strong reservations with respect to the whole enterprise......?
Thank you D. lol. That Orchi fella is often NS, dunno what he's on about 99% of the time. You best see that Fido hound.
The brain on tha fella goes AWOLfar too often and that Fido is far too authoritarian for my liking...
Both too far out...
He's friendly really, but has to bark at naughty people who 'forget' to mark poems 18+ if they should be so marked!
Fun write Orchi.
Andy
Thank you Gold. lol.
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