The girl next door

sorenbarrett

I was four when the girl next door taught me how to kiss

She was older and a little bolder, she didn't aim to miss

The little wenchy gave me a frenchy, tongue drilling for oil

Being a little bloke I started to choke and her passion it did foil

I thought it crass that she grabbed my ass and gave me a lift

I started to wheeze and then to sneeze, a green booger was her gift

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  • Teddy.15

    lol love the flow the rhyme and the theme, ah the first kiss 💋 must have been magnificent to remember at the ripe age of four 🤣

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks so much Teddy for the read and review. I deeply appreciate your kind words

    • Paul Bell

      That'll teach her.
      Wonder how many hearts she broke through the years..

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks Paul for the read and words of support they are most valued

      • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

        A definite fav

      • David Wakeling

        Now this is a fun story.Lucky it wasn't in the days of Covid 19. Well constructed and good cadence.Well done

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you so much for your review and for your kind words of support I appreciate your encouragement

        • Katie B.

          Love it! This is great.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you, Katie. I appreciate your read of this short piece and your approval.

          • Lorenz

            I never had my first kiss .I just stole them all after that...

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you so much for reading this piece and I hope that your thefts go unpunished

              • Lorenz

                I really punished myself ...

              • Demar Desu

                LOL

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you so much for the read and for your comment

                • Doggerel Dave

                  An older woman who knows the ropes - the way to go.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you, Dave an older woman, indeed

                  • orchidee

                    I'm gonna be sick - that booger! lol. Not that you intended to make us feel queasy.

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you so much for the read and support it is most appreciated

                    • 2781

                      No stiffy then?

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thanks a lot for the read. It’s appreciated.

                      • Kevin Hulme

                        Like it. An enjoyable Read.

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thank you, Kevin appreciate it

                        • hzugman

                          Very cute. Love it!

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thanks so much for the read and comment my friend it is deeply appreciated



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