A MYSTICAL BREEZE

nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

It is the tender touch
Which makes me weep
A hand that sweeps
Calms the sleep
Its ambient glow
Its soothing words
The vibrancy
The way it cares.

The warm embrace
Its comforting arms
The tears that fall
Its singular charm
The distant gaze
To lands afar
Hidden dimensions
A falling star.

Eyes to wonder
Thoughts to flame
Colour to dance
Negativity tame
Moments sheltered
Time to freeze
Untouchable voice
Upon a mystical breeze.

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Comments6

  • sorenbarrett

    All that is attractive remembered in this write of nostalgia and wistfulness. Nicely written

  • orchidee

    Good write N. Is it breezy at that bus stop? You still waiting?! loll.

  • Katie B.

    Lovely!

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Norman, this carries a soft strength…tender, calming, and steady all the way through. The way it moves through touch, warmth, and wonder…yeah, it settles in and lingers. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

  • arqios

    There is a transporting inspiration beyond ordinary experience into a space of emotional and imaginative richness by way of an intangible presence like the breeze and that is comforting and transforming. 🙏🕊️

  • Goldfinch60

    Those tender touches can be so overwhelming in true love Norman.

    Andy



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