When the Cold Fire Burns

Salvia.S


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When love fades away 

Like warmth fading on a rainy day,

The cold fire still burns the heart,

Letting love depart

 

- Salvia.S

© Salvia.S

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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    First comment! Yay! Salvia, this carries a soft ache…love slipping away but still leaving a trace behind. That “cold fire” holds both sides of it at once…warmth remembered, but something shifting underneath. It really lands. Beautifully done, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

    • Salvia.S

      Thank you so much dearest Tittu ❤️❤️

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        You are most welcome, my dear friend!

      • sorenbarrett

        Most poetic my friend and a fave.

        • Salvia.S

          Thank you very much ❤️❤️

          • sorenbarrett

            You are always most welcome Salvia

          • orchidee

            Good write S.

            • Salvia.S

              Thank you so much!!!

            • Katie B.

              Excellent

              • Salvia.S

                Thank you very much!!!

              • Goldfinch60

                Such true words Salvia.

                Andy

                • Salvia.S

                  Thank you very much ❤️



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