When the Cold Fire Burns

Salvia.S

When love fades away 

Like warmth fading on a rainy day,

The cold fire still burns the heart,

Letting love depart

 

- Salvia.S

© Salvia.S

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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    First comment! Yay! Salvia, this carries a soft ache…love slipping away but still leaving a trace behind. That “cold fire” holds both sides of it at once…warmth remembered, but something shifting underneath. It really lands. Beautifully done, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

    • Salvia.S

      Thank you so much dearest Tittu ❤️❤️

    • sorenbarrett

      Most poetic my friend and a fave.

      • Salvia.S

        Thank you very much ❤️❤️

        • sorenbarrett

          You are always most welcome Salvia

        • orchidee

          Good write S.

          • Salvia.S

            Thank you so much!!!

          • Katie B.

            Excellent

            • Salvia.S

              Thank you very much!!!



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