I've given up writing my sad, sad song
truth is my darling I know you are gone
our life time together
was gone in a flash
now my heart bleeds
I wish you were back
If a lifetime is a moment
I'll take it with pride
If a lifetime is a moment
our future now died
I'll think of you always
on beach and on sand
where we watched
all the sunsets
on shore hand in hand
If a lifetime is a moment
I'll take it with pride
If a lifetime is a moment
our future now died
times that you told me
your secrets and fears
I'll hold them forever
protect them through years
If a lifetime is a moment
I'll take it with pride
If a lifetime is a moment
our future now died
I’ll live on without you
my angel above
and
each time I think of you
It will be…
with nothing but love
with nothing but love.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: May 5th, 2026 05:14
- Comment from author about the poem: Lyrics of a new song I wrote today. I suspect I'll have a few edits before it's complete. ❤️
- Category: Love
- Views: 12
- Users favorite of this poem: Thomas W Case, Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments4
A wonderful song of memory of love that has lived its life but remains in the mind. Very nicely done my friend
Already edited the last stanza thank you my dear sorrenbarret hot off the press this very day. 🌹
You are most welcome Teddy
Sweet Teddy, This reads like grief refusing to harden—still warm enough to ache instead of just sting.
The refrain gives it a steady heartbeat, but it risks dulling the impact if it isn’t tightened slightly in repetition.
I tried AI to help me with comments....sorry, that is a terrible comment. This poem is brilliant and heartfelt.
And I thought you were losing your mind 🤣 A I? I think you can really just use even one word from your own intelligence that means the world to me dear Thomas, from the heart. 🌹
You are the best...from the heart.
That is four words 🤣 🤣🤣🤣 🤗
Teddy, I love your lyricism dearest poet/songwriter 🌹...this brought me to that space where memories feel closer than the present…where moments replay because they’re all you have left to hold onto. There’s something deeply human in that. You captured it well. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you dear Tristan one day I'll be called a songwriter for real or maybe a tritetyper lol 🤣
Wonderful write Teddy, I just hope it is not true.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy, I do believe over time we all lose someone we love 💜
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