Beyond the Rain

Salvia.S


Notice of absence from Salvia.S
I'll be here after this week......

Looking at the rain 

Feels like those infinite tears

Worries wash away

- Salvia.S

© Salvia.S 

  • Author: Salvia.S (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 8th, 2026 12:59
  • Comment from author about the poem: Senryu
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 22
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments7

  • orchidee

    Good write S.

    • Salvia.S

      Thank you so much!

    • sorenbarrett

      A most interesting poem Salvia where rain associated with tears washes away worries. Nicely written

      • Salvia.S

        Thank you very much!

        • sorenbarrett

          You are most welcome Salvia

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Salvia, this senryu is beautiful in its simplicity. The connection between tears, rain, and release feels so natural...nothing forced, nothing overstated. I especially love how the final line shifts the poem from sadness into quiet healing. Gentle, graceful work, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

          • Salvia.S

            Thank you so much dearest Tittu ❤️

          • Doggerel Dave

            I don't know if you make a habit of 5-7-5s, but this one is certainly worth the trouble.

            • Salvia.S

              Thank you so much!

            • Goldfinch60

              Super senryu Salvia.

              Andy

              • Salvia.S

                Thank you very much 🌹

              • arqios

                Rain is a funny thing, sometimes soothing and at other times reminds us of tears. Good stuff, Salvia 🕊️🙏

                • Salvia.S

                  Thank you very much ❤️

                  • arqios

                    Most welcome, Salvia🕊️🙏🏻

                  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

                    much enjoyed read



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