Looking at the rain
Feels like those infinite tears
Worries wash away
- Salvia.S
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Salvia.S (
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- Category: Haiku
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Good write S.
A most interesting poem Salvia where rain associated with tears washes away worries. Nicely written
Salvia, this senryu is beautiful in its simplicity. The connection between tears, rain, and release feels so natural...nothing forced, nothing overstated. I especially love how the final line shifts the poem from sadness into quiet healing. Gentle, graceful work, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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