Paradise at mom's feet

NafisaSB

My mother, alas, is now no more

She has surely entered Heaven’s door

But what she left for us behind

Will always remain in my mind

 

Our head, she said, should be held high

That is possible, if you don’t lie..

Our eyes should see the good in others

And treat them all, as if, our brothers

 

Our ears should not listen to rumour

But listen to stories that pass on humour

Our lips should always turn up in a smile

This will carry us mile after mile

 

Use the tongue to tell the truth

This will always bear good fruit

Shoulders should be used to be leaned on

Be it night, or be it morn

 

Hands to help, and hands to hold

Exuding warmth, and in prayers, fold

Heart to love, and to care

And always, compassion, to bear and share

 

Feet should always walk

On the straight and narrow path

That was the message

That would set us apart

 

Be at peace, Mother

You are like no other

We would, always, in you, confide

You were our source of strength and pride

 

Your soul hovers around us still

You never complained, even when ill;

It gives us comfort when we are sad

And reminds us of the good times, we had

 

Heaven lies at Mother’s feet, it’s said

So even though the heart is heavy as lead

I pray, that you will continue to be there

In spirit, our whole life, to share

 

  • Author: safina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 9th, 2026 07:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: on the eve of mother's day, dedicating this poem about my mom to all the beautiful mothers in the world..stay happy
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Friendship, Tristan Robert Lange, Teddy.15, DeadRose
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  • sorenbarrett

    Such a beautiful and strong message of a mother's duty well done. A fave

    • NafisaSB

      thanks - she was worthy of it..

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Nafisa

      • Friendship

        Beautifully written

        • NafisaSB

          so happy it resonated with you

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Safina, this is such a loving and heartfelt tribute…you can feel not only the grief here, but the deep gratitude for the kind of person your mother was and the values she planted in those around her. Really moving work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

          • NafisaSB

            yes - she did try to instil values in us - and am glad that she did so, as it has helped us turn out into what we are...

          • Doggerel Dave

            There's a profound truth in the idea that to see the mother is to see the daughter, I believe.

            What to say to all the mothers out there who don't happen to be beautiful in mind or body, and really should not have produced a daughter at all?

            • NafisaSB

              maybe, and maybe not- depends on many factors whether the child is a copy of the mother, though it may so happen that different attributes are passed to different siblings...
              as so if not beautiful in mind or body , they may still produce a gem of a person, who knows???
              food for thought..

            • Goldfinch60

              Wonderful dedication Nafisa.

              Andy

              • NafisaSB

                glad you liked it, as she was strict about us behaving properly, though never cruel...

              • Teddy.15

                Happy mother's day ❤️

                • NafisaSB

                  a belated mother's day from one mom to another - hope you had a great time - i just got messages and calls from both my kids....

                • Neville



                  I imagine everyone who passes this way & no matter where they are heading will hit the heart shaped icon before leaving this page .. A beautiful tribute to so many .. Neville ❤️

                  • NafisaSB

                    Whether it’s seen by others or not hope it reaches my mom in heaven as also all
                    Mums out there for most of them , and of course many dads too deserve it 🤗 thanks for the generous feedback 💐🙏🏼



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