Dreams in Hand

Teddy.15

 

In my next life 

I want to come back as a passionate pianist
 
playing the piano as if my hands
 
were melted inside the silk
 
of the melody itself.
 
 
 
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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Teddy, this is delicate and deeply evocative work. The poem captures not only a love of music, but a longing for total immersion within it…to dissolve into melody itself. The “silk of the melody” image especially gives the piece such softness and emotional elegance. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you so much dear Tristan my recent losses have brought me a most charming muse. Thank you my dear friend. 🌹

    • sorenbarrett

      What a wonderful line Teddy (hands melted inside the silk of the melody itself) most poetic

      • Teddy.15

        I'm feeling incredibly lucky this week, I've had some wonderful writer's moments, thanks to my recent losses and my new found muse, when I hear a great pianist, that is exactly how it makes me feel that their hands are somehow entwined into the keys. I could only wish to play the piano like that. Thank you dear friend. 🌹

        • sorenbarrett

          Most welcome Teddy

        • Goldfinch60

          So be it Teddy, may you play the piano with wonder.

          Andy

          https://youtu.be/EvNsPyp5O2I?si=trEQpd41ajmnDcFm

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you for the wonderful link dear Andy, hands melted inside the silk of the melody itself! Beautiful music a fabulous talent. 🌹

          • Thomas W Case

            Feels like a quiet yearning to dissolve into something beautiful and lose the weight of being human.
            There’s a soft ache in it, like wanting not just to play the music—but to become it.

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you sweet sweet Thomas, I really would have loved to be able to play the piano. 🌹



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