Walking From The Mist.

Goldfinch60



Walking by My River

The mist shrouded all

But the white ground

On which I walked.

Out of the mist swam a swan,

Floating in silence,

Like a ghostly spirit,

Not a ripple around him.

He saw me and seemed to smile,

Two beings enjoying the silence

And the beauty of nature

That was hidden around us,

But we knew it was there.

 

I walked on where suddenly

I walked out from the mist

Into a glorious clear day,

Where the sun sparkled

On the water,

And glistened on the frost

That covered all,

Natures artist at her best,

Enthralling me

With the power of the beauty,

That she can produce with her brush.

I looked back into the mist

Realizing that many days are like this,

Where you move from the dark,

Into the light.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 11th, 2026 00:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: The light is there for us all.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 9
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  • Neville


    Yep, you've just got to go look for it .. unless you know where to find it .. either way, like Dylan said .. Always carry a spare light bulb .. .. but me, well I always keep a charged torch handy Andy .. just in case .. Neville

    • Goldfinch60

      Yes Neville, we must always have the light with us.

      Andy

    • Teddy.15

      Beautiful dear Andy, such beautiful reflection and by the way imagery. 🌹

      • Goldfinch60

        Most kind Teddy, thank you.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        Good write Gold.

      • sorenbarrett

        Nicely symbolized Andy and well written a metaphor in life. Nicely done

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you soren, much appreciated.

          Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            Always welcome my friend



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