Flat is flat and that is that, one may take a spill on a hill so keep it on the level
Dull is drole so when in a hole don't loose your soul, don't bet with the devil
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sorenbarrett (
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Such a powerful message here !! We Keep fighting no matter what ,pain and sadness are part of life !! Amazing poem
We must always keep going soren.
Andy
never give up keep plugging away
What is happening to you, Soren?
So simple and direct...
The internal rhymes almost made me read it like a rap... which I adore! Wonderfully written and beautiful message a fave
Still sounds forlorn, as did yesterday. Hope all is well.
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