[INTRO – spoken, reflective]
Here's a reflective view as a father of 21 years,
and now two little ones again.
A parent's love will, to start with, lift the child up,
give them a cloud to sit upon,
make them feel like nothing else matters in this world
other than running into your parents' arms
to feel the warmth, comfort, and safety.
That love will be everything.
The essence of what you need.
The breath of your life
is the love from your mother and father.
[VERSE 1]
And then at some point,
that’s going to slip.
And that love is going to become crushing to them,
too much, overbearing,
to the point that they just don’t need it or want it,
and they’ll cut you off.
So you will literally go
from being the very essence of
you couldn’t give them enough love,
they just want more and more and more,
they soak it up, they soak it up,
they make it —
You just wanna pile more and love in,
and they love it,
you love them,
they love it,
everything’s amazing.
And then there’ll be this switch.
[PRE-HOOK – lift]
And who knows when the switch happens?
You just don’t know.
It happens when it happens, really —
fluidity.
[HOOK]
Holy cow.
Did I know I am sacred to my own land?
Pow, pow.
I have no hold over my children
and my children have no hold over me.
I am just grateful for the journey.
Moon and the sea,
pushing the tides constantly —
that is life’s melody.
[VERSE 2]
Because the most challenging part
is they push you,
they pull you,
they make you go beyond limits
you didn’t know you had.
Each time you explain something to them
you go —
oh no,
I think I need to practice what I preach.
Now I’ve told it to you,
I need to do it myself.
Or sometimes you explain something to your child
and you go,
well, I never thought of it like that —
but now explaining it to you,
it makes more sense to me.
Thank you.
And we both go off.
Diddly! diddley dee
Because, you know,
they grow,
we grow.
[BRIDGE – emotional expansion]
At first I was the sun.
Arms like gravity.
Now I am the moon.
Pulling from distance.
Not less love.
Just different form.
I have no hold over my children.
And my children have no hold over me.
Only tides.
Only rhythm.
Only return.
[FINAL HOOK – fuller, powerful]
Holy cow.
Did I know I am sacred to my own land?
Pow, pow.
No chains.
No ownership.
No control.
Just gratitude.
Moon and the sea,
pushing the tides constantly —
that is life’s melody.
And I am just grateful
for the journey
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This song makes and breaks me every time! Life is a never-ending test to keep the love you hold in your hand. Keep up the write much peace and respect
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Lovely and holding truth as a parent and grandparent I have seen it. Well written
It is a journey like no other my friend. Really appreciate your time
You are most welcome
My friend, βAt first I was the sun / Arms like gravity / Now I am the moonβ is absolutely beautiful. That shift in metaphor says so much about changing parental love with remarkable simplicity. Excellent lyrics. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
I'll be honest it comes from my son cutting me off at the start of the year and dealing with how to hold on to the love that felt lost. Plus a bit of my own journey with my care givers.. really appreciate your time my friend
Nice writ
Thank you kindly
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