Down to the beach you go,
Sit on the sand and watch the sea.
The waves come towards you,
As you watch them your mind calms
And starts to match the rhythm of the waves.
Your thoughts start to settle
And naturally slow down
Bringing peace and tranquility,
Peace and tranquility within you
Which shows love and joy in your life.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 17th, 2026 01:18
- Comment from author about the poem: Sitting by the sea can be so good for you.
- Category: Reflection
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I've known a couple who tried that and they drowned .. but then I guess it's the circles within which we mix .. Neville 👍
Very true Neville, mine seemed to have been wonderful.
Andy
One of my mom's favorite songs is 'Sitting On The Dock Of The Bay' by Ottis Redding. This piece is almost like the song.
Good write...
Persistence is key
Thank you Forever, persistence is certainly the key.
Andy
Waves hypnotic in their regular repetition seem like the heartbeat within the womb drowning out all other sounds. A lovely write Andy
Very true soren, thank you.
Andy
You are very welcome Andy
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
Ah yes, what a beautiful picture. 🌹
Most kind Teddy, thank you,
Andy
TO the sea! 🕊️🙏
Thank you Rik, see you there.
Andy
Yes! ⛵🌊🪸🐚
i agree wholeheartedly - it can be a balm - and quieten our nerves, giving us solace and serenity...
So very true Nafisa, thank you.
Andy
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