i remember.
You used to yell,
Your temper as short
as i was back then.
the fear i would feel,
if i made a mistake
when i see You to this day,
i still feel my heart quake.
but You were the one
shining that light to my eyes,
when it burnt into my skull,
was the damage a surprise?
You made me who i am now.
yet i always let You down,
and that’s why I’m happier
When you’re not around.
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Author:
Vio (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 20th, 2026 18:54
- Comment from author about the poem: There is a LOT of structural things to take apart from this poem .. fun!
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
I can’t tell exactly if this about a partner,or a parent,but either way it resonates with me,and it makes me so greatful that whatever we went through separately,we can both say it made us who we are today.Keep your head up.
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