The Robin sat on branches of a apple tree

Caring dove


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There once lived a apple tree , red and green like the colour of cherries and pears . Standing there on the grass connected to the land below it’s feet , the tree smiled as it knew there was no way it could fall . Those apples sat on the branches feeling at home with each other , in colours of cheery cherries and perfect pastel pears . A Robin flew by with a cosy red colour dancing happily on its chest , sat on the branches of the apple tree wandering at the colours shining out .

it could see a red and thought to itself ,that colours a bit like the colour sitting on my skin , could see the green and thought well that’s a bit like the grass but more of a pastel shade . So the Robin sat with the apple tree wandering at the colours she could see , thinking how nice it is that those have grown from a strong steady place and are sitting right now , just sitting in their home 

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  • Friendship

    Nice story.Enjoy your read

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Caring Dove, this is wonderfully gentle. The entire piece feels like it is resting rather than rushing. I love how the robin simply observes and appreciates what is already there instead of needing to change anything. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

    • Caring dove

      Thankyou )) that’s a really nice comment on my poem . Yeah I liked writing this ..


      I love nature .. I often see lot of birds in the garden ..

    • sorenbarrett

      This seems a reflection over a scene viewed of nature. It casts a beautiful image and is well told

      • Caring dove

        I didn’t see a Robin sit in a apple tree but yeah I often see robins in the garden..

        Thanks for the kind words

        • sorenbarrett

          You are most welcome

        • Goldfinch60

          Fine words Yellow Rose.

          Andy

        • rhmn_7

          What a happy display of nature, nice write Caring dove!

        • orchidee

          Good write dove.

        • NafisaSB

          enjoyed reading the story of the tree, and the robin...

          • Caring dove

            Thankyou ))

            • NafisaSB

              most welcome..take care



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