Rain falling

Caring dove

Here is the rain falling from a place that needs to let go 

falling from clouds that need to find the white colour again 

that need to feel like sitting doves 

daisies in the sun 

and soft snow without the weight of the Tiring cold 

 

here is the rain falling from the greys 

needing to 

Wanting to 

allowing all the white colour to return 

allowing the doves to be just sitting 

and the daisy petals ti rest quietly in the sky 

grounded 

soft snow to rest just there 

in the warmth without having to fall 

a peace to be found just by letting go 

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Letting go is so hard to do but so needed. Well said and cleverly the indication that one must fall to let go but falling is not bad just as falling in love is not bad. Well said.

    • Caring dove

      Thankyou )) but yeah it was just about rain , and yeah having some peace return . It’s just what came to me when I was writing . The colour white made me think of doves , snow etc so I just went with what I was thinking really .

      Sometimes we can be sad , and cry and that can be like a release

      Or emotions can be difficult and we want to find peace instead

      Thanks ))

      • Caring dove

        But I guess it could be read in that way

        Thanks for the comment anyway

        • sorenbarrett

          You are most welcome I often read more into a poem than what was originally intended

          • Caring dove

            Yeah , it’s just what came to me when I was writing . I wasn’t thinking to write about that , I simply just thought to write about rain .. but yeah it can be read in different ways . ..

            Nobody wants the feel sad like a grey cloud

          • Goldfinch60

            May that peace always be with us YR.

            Andy

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Caring Dove, this really moved me. There is such a gentle sense of release running through these words...like watching a storm finally exhaust itself and make room for calm again. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

          • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

            good write

          • NafisaSB

            such a beautiful and soothing poem - enjoyed..



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