Misty morning haze
obscuring what we hold dear
greying out my mood.
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Author:
Fränz Müller (
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A lovely hybrid haiku senryu that may be taken literally or metaphorically. Nicely done my friend
Tremendous
Fränz, this hit me right away. Three lines, and the atmosphere is instantly there. That feeling of waking into a gray world and carrying a bit of that grayness inside yourself comes through beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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