It hurts the most
When you're just nothing
But they're your everything
- Salvia.S
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Salvia.S (
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- Category: Sad
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First comment! Yay! Salvia, what a poignant piece. The simplicity gives it its strength...there's nowhere for the emotion to hide. That final contrast between being "nothing" to someone who is "everything" to you lands with heartbreaking honesty. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you so much dearest Tittu for your read, feedback and the fave ❤️🌹
Lovely written, your words are so true
Thank you so much dear friend ❤️
The imbalance of power expressed in this short write it contains feelings of injustice and general sadness. Love unrequited always a powerful theme. Well done Salvia and a fave
Thank you very much for the read, feedback and the fave ❤️. Very much appreciated!!
My pleasure Salvia
Punches home when yoiu realise you're second best.
You can see why people walk away.
That's true. Thanks for the read and feedback! Very much appreciated!
Very nicely and very sincerely written. I agree with you, my dear!
Thank you very much dear ❤️❤️❤️❤️
The ones you love are always everything Salvia.
Andy
Thank you so much for the kind words ❤️❤️❤️
Short, sweet and many a times quite true- a good one 💅
Thank you so much dear ❤️
my pleasure - you are most welcome
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