Caught a glimpse
Of you today
A grimmanced smile
That didnt say
Words now lost
Which waved goodbye
Footsteps that lead
To an angry sky.
The bleakness sighed
The stoney ground
Too many people
All around
We became old
In a blinking eye
Hidden thoughts
Of you and I.
In evening skies
Of rolling cloud
Moments resurface
Without sound
Music plays
From long ago
Hearts and minds
Which long to know.
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Author:
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) (
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Comments6
There is a sense of melancholy mixed with nostalgia where the past leaves a mystery. Nicely done Norman
much appreciated, thanking you
You are most welcome Norman
Dear Norman this is incredibly beautiful and a song in itself. 🌹
most kind, thanking you always much appreciated my friend
A fine write N. The sky is not the only angry thing as we wait for that bus! lol.
thats true, next stop please lol
Norman, what a poignant piece. The gentle rhythm and reflective tone make it feel like paging through old memories, each one carrying a little more longing than the last. The ending leaves the heart quietly searching alongside the poem. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
most kind comments, always very much appreciated thanking you
Time passes Norman but those thoughts of love in the past are always there.
Andy
so true my friend thanks and appreciation
A beautiful nostalgic verse 👌
thanking you for read, always very much appreciated
always welcome..have a relaxing weekend..
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