Unblessed

Fränz Müller

Do the things we say and do

bring curses on our heads?

Can we not choose better things

and then be blessed instead?

We have free will to pick a path

to the right or to the left;

we can receive the bounty

or leave ourselves bereft.

Every night and every morn

we get to choose and see

what Yahweh either gives or takes

to others, you and me.

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  • sorenbarrett

    Viewing blessings from a religious point of view and how they should motivate. Well written

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Fränz, what a thoughtful poem. "Every night and every morn / we get to choose" especially resonated with me. I like that it keeps the focus on personal responsibility while also holding onto the hope that each day offers a fresh beginning. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

  • rhmn_7

    Your poem beautifully highlights the profound power of free will, reminding us that our daily choices shape our destinies and invite either divine blessings or curses dear poet!

  • NafisaSB

    Truly spoken👍✌️agree with you here



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