THE FADED BEAUTY ( TO M )

nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

You so often used
Your natural beauty
To deceive
And earthly gain
But years became
Your bitter enemy
Lines and wrinkles
Upon your face.

Your cruel heart
And selfish ways
Now much stronger
Can never change
The bitterness of soul
Is living still
A lack of sympathy
Eyes instill.

Now as we
Our time grows old
These simple words
The truth unfolds
Blonde and beautiful
Many years before
As the book is closed
Where do you go ?

 

 

  • Author: nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 12th, 2026 04:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: a natural beauty who was both callous deceiving and cruel, it applies to both men and women who are this way inclined
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 43
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • arqios

    This speaks to me of physical beauty fading with age, but the kind of person we are endures on. If beauty was our greatest asset while our character remained bitter, what is left when beauty disappears? πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Norman, this is a thoughtful piece. I especially appreciated the way it ends with "Where do you go?" After everything that comes before it, that question invites a deeper reflection than appearances ever could. Really enjoyed this, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

  • sorenbarrett

    When one is so insecure that one looks for others to be attracted to them physical beauty is important. Age is a harsh judge and one can not wage off the results of it forever. Mirror mirror on the wall who's the fairest of them all? Good write

  • sorenbarrett

    Too much focus on beauty is vanity and such is the present state of this world.

  • Thomas W Case

    Powerful work. You paint this scene well.

  • orchidee

    Good write N. Was it also someone named M who lost their natural beauty.... we know it... waiting for a bus so long?! lol.

  • Goldfinch60

    Many are like this Norman and get worse with age but I also believe the reverse that there are good people out there who get kinder as they grow older.

    Andy



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