Pending storm

sorenbarrett

Even before the horizon darkens there is an electric static in the air
A screaming silence that deafens the listening ear
A cold front moves in as wind loosens its tongue
Dark clouded brows flash lightning's swords sending prickles up the spine
A hurricane 
The wife has arrived

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  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

    A definite fav

  • Mutley Ravishes

    Lol! Love it, Soren. Can you write some more of these?!

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you Mutley for the revies and kind words of encouragement they are most welcome

    • arqios

      A that tempest I know do well🕊️🙏🏻

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you Cryptic for the read and kind words of support they are appreciated my friend

        • arqios

          Most welcome friend 🙏🏻🕊️

        • Paul Bell

          I reckon if you've been married for thirty years, at least twenty of those years were waiting for her to get ready.
          The other ten were spent shopping. Is hurricane actually strong enough, maybe nuclear explosion. Okay she's ready need to go.

          • sorenbarrett

            A fellow traveler recognizes the perils of the journey. Appreciate the read and comment my friend.

          • orchidee

            Good write SB. lol.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thanks Orchi appreciate the read and comment wonder if this sounded at all familiar with KP you know

              • orchidee

                Yesssssssssssss lol.

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Haha, Soren, what a setup! The tension rises through every approaching sign until the entire natural disaster walks through the door. I did not see that turn coming...absolutely hilarious, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks so much Tristan I do appreciate the read and comment they are highly anticipated

                • Teddy.15

                  LoL 😂 fabulous. 🌹 Ere if I was her I might swing for you with me handbag 👜 lol 🤣

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thanks my friend I appreciate your read and support

                  • Doggerel Dave

                    Don't believe a word of it, Soren. Found it very entertaining, notwithstanding..

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Ah Dave I wouldn't kid ya about something like that. Thanks for the read and comment my old friend

                    • Kevin Hulme

                      Like it . And the Mice throw themselves in the Traps. A fave.

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thanks Kevin I appreciate the review and words of support

                        • Kevin Hulme

                          My Pleasure as always.

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Good fun write soren. I hope the storm calms down into beauty and love.

                          Andy

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thanks Andy I appreciate your review and kind comment. Your support is most vallued

                          • peto

                            Sometimes soren
                            You write at a different level
                            Superb

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thank you Peto my mind wanders and so do I. I appreciate your read and kind words they mean a lot



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