Sheep and Shepherd

orchidee



Tune: Crimond

('The Lord's my Shepherd')

Linking with Psalm 23

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Find times of rest and quietness

The Lord seeks us to bless

Our good Shepherd leads us safely

In peace and harmony

 

What all we need to be doing

In daily life, each thing

Not overstrain ourselves, but be

In His will constantly

 

Await a while and take some ease

Some leisure as you please

Not taken up with things complex

Things that cause us to vex

 

Our faithful companion He be

E'er leading His sheep free

In pastures green, reviving springs

Strength, comfort to us brings

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Comments8

  • sorenbarrett

    I thought this would be a short hymn to go with a short church service

    • orchidee

      Heehee - and here is the poem!

      • sorenbarrett

        Amazing! That has to be a fave

      • sorenbarrett

        Very sneaky my friend posting a coming attractions post then going in behind the scenes and editing a new poem to leave people feeling stupid for not having read it. I try to read all but if you had not been kind enough to give me warning I might have overlooked it. And a fine read indeed. I don't understand why you were trying to hide it. I told you it would be a fave

        • orchidee

          Thank you SB. I was trying out a poem on another PC. When I tried it before, it did not align properly. Erm, I had not thought up the words at that stage either. lol.

          • sorenbarrett

            You got new equipment how nice.

          • Doggerel Dave

            I am perplexed at your interaction with Soren above: Which of you is NS? However your penultimate stanza leaves me in no doubt that you have incorporated the values of a '60's hippie and are preparing to drop out...

            • orchidee

              Thank you D. I posted a 'test poem' with a couple of words in it (gone now).
              Or - it's probably me in an NS moment.
              I am staying cool, and far out, man - penultimate stanza! lol.

              • Doggerel Dave

                Well done, Sire - you are scheduled to live 'til at least150. Your God will have to wait...

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Beautifully done, Orchi! Unfortunately, P. Silly (erm Solus) has declared himself Assistant Shepherd of Recreational Affairs and converted the green pasture into an all-inclusive resort. The sheep are ordering mocktails, the spinach has vanished, and nobody has accomplished a damn thing since Tuesday. Apparently, your message reached him! πŸ˜‚πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

                • orchidee

                  Thank you T. Popeye is fired from being the Good, erm, Bad Shepherd. lol.

                • GenXer Sharon πŸ™πŸ€

                  Beautiful Work Orchiee

                  • orchidee

                    Thank you GS.

                  • Neville



                    A fine hymn poem sir ..

                    • orchidee

                      Baaa, thank you N. lol. Not Baa humbug, but baa, I'm a sheep!

                    • Thomas W Case

                      Beautiful.

                      • orchidee

                        Thank you T.

                      • NafisaSB

                        Did bring me some comfort reading it. Thanks πŸ™πŸΌπŸ‘

                        • orchidee

                          Thank you N.

                          • NafisaSB

                            Welcome πŸ€—



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