I Got Wasted ! (Again)

Mutley Ravishes

"So, how was it this time round?"

"Well, I ended up in a

Shallow grave

After being slowly eroded

By waves

Of ignorance!"

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  • Demar Desu

    Surfs up

    • Mutley Ravishes

      The surf's so big it's engulfing the whole planet!

    • sorenbarrett

      Full of metaphor this clever piece sends its message well and I hope the grave is not robbed.

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      What a wonderfully dark little piece, Mutley! The casual exchange, morbid absurdity, and sharp social sting work perfectly together. It made me laugh…and then wonder whether I should begin measuring myself for a coffin! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

      • Mutley Ravishes

        Thanks, Tristan. I think those "waves of ignorance" come mostly from the interior!



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