Yesterday
I saw the sun
Straining to shine
Emitting a whine
Of self-pity
Then gorging on
Its own energy
So I gave it a slap
And a kick up the back
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Mutley Ravishes (
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What?! Are you the moon???! Tis the season, methinks.
Nope. I`m its collapsed twin!
Hahaha!
Got to correct these things.
Precisely! Otherwise there`s all kinds of sufferings.
Ah, yes! Like that old radio transistor or vacuum tube TV's 🙏🕊️
I used to enjoy giving the tv a whack. The good old days!
Yup, from static to purer definition... grayscaled black and white crispness 📺🕊️🙏🤩
My friend, this is delightfully ridiculous…the greatest source of light in our world reduced to a sulking fool in need of firm encouragement. Loved it! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
I don`t think we`ll ever witness Old Sol reduced to "sulking fool"! Thank Heavens. As for us lot? Oh well...
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