'an evening harmony'
Dusk drapes softly over the trees,
A whispering breeze begins to play.
The sky ignites with hues of peace,
As twilight gently melts the day.
A whispering breeze begins to play,
It carries dreams of light and shade,
As twilight gently melts the day,
And shadows dance in twilight's glade.
It carries dreams of light and shade,
Where laughter mingles with the night.
And shadows dance in twilight's glade,
Creating magic in the fading light.
Where laughter mingles with the night,
The stars awaken, bright and clear.
Creating magic in the fading light,
A serenade for all who hear.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 3rd, 2026 05:13
- Comment from author about the poem: ...something brought over from the Malaysian pantoum form.
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Comments8
Beautiful synchronized meter in this poem of soft images yet vivid create a tender and rhymical hypnotic feel to this poem Cryptic. It carries the reader to a gentler place.
That was indeed the effect that was aimed for. Thanks my friend🙏🏻🕊️
You are welcome my friend
A gentle read full of nature
Many thanks dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
most welcome
Lovely said. Your poem "An Evening Harmony" explores the serene beauty and tranquility of twilight as day transitions into night.
Thank you dear Friendship. This is most appreciated. 🙏🏻🕊️
Good write A.
Thanks O 🙏🏻🕊️
What a gorgeous piece, arqios! The woven repetition moves like music while the landscape gradually settles from glowing color into starlight...gentle, immersive, and filled with wonder. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
The pantoum style is somewhat tricky in English but still workable. Thanks for validating that, dear Tittu. Hope you’re settled in nicely for the colder months. 🙏🏻🕊️
Harmony the call. Painted perfectly. Thanks Rik.
Thanks Dave; so good to hear from you again. 🙏🏻🕊️
Like the way the same line would appear in the next Stanza. Enjoyable.
Thanks Kevin, so glad that worked out. Much appreciated read🙏🏻🕊️
It worked out well . My Pleasure.
May that serenade always be there for us Rik.
Andy
Thank you Andy🙏🏻🕊️
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