Passion Loaf.

Goldfinch60



The hands rub gently,

And slowly the size increases;

Harder and harder go the palms,

Faster and faster until at last it is done.

Passion spent, wait for a while

Until the size is twice as big!

 

Then!

 

Then the dough is put in the oven

To bake the bread.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 26th, 2026 01:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: I have been making my own bread for very many years.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 28
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  • 2781

    Unfortunately mine hasn't risen to well in my last couple of attempts.

    • Goldfinch60

      Shame 2781, try more yeast. LOL

      Andy

      • 2781

        I suspect it was dead.

      • sorenbarrett

        Inuendo mistaken always a great lead in for story, poem or joke. Well done my friend

        • Goldfinch60

          It was all in your mind soren, LOL

          Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            And I thought it was all on the page Andy LOL

          • Poetic Dan

            Very very good my friend! I bet that's some fabulous bread!

            • Goldfinch60

              It certainly was Dan, thank you.

              Andy

            • orchidee

              Good write Gold. lol. Did you write any of the 'Carry On' scripts?!

              • Goldfinch60

                Only the one where Barbara Windsor was throwing her arms back. LOL.

                • orchidee

                  A swoony one! lol.

                • Dan Williams

                  Yes, bread. Sure.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Yes it was Dan. LOL

                    Andy



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