You can wake up and have the most beautiful view, yet still wish you wasn't you!
Countdown the hours from the moment you're up, because you've felt and seen enough.
To be blessed and cursed down this road, makes my poetry the breath I yearn
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Keep up the write until we get it right or nothing is left and the centre feels fine. Truly appreciate anyone's time. Life is nothing without a rhyme
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I agree - glory be!
Hey hey. Have a splendid day! Thank you popping in along the way
Clever work in the note as well as the poem a good read my friend
Can't be helped and always appreciated my friend
My pleasure
Dan, this hit me hard. I have known days when the goodness surrounding me could not reach the pain within...and putting that darkness onto the page helped me survive it. One hell of a powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Yes my friend. Every day at the moment! These words came as I hit the beach one glorious morning but really wish I wasn't me. Thanks again for being here! Keep up the write
Every time I wake up I know it will be a good day Dan.
Andy
I'll endeavour to get to that point in life my friend! Thank you for being here! Have a wonderful day
Dan the man
Great to see you writing
And keeping it real as always
Welcome back
Hey ho! It's all I know. The writing never stops, recorded or not. So good to see you my friend and your welcoming means alot
I absolutely adore the title and the second line of your poem
Touching piece of work great job
I really appreciate your time and energy from my darkness I write to find my light!
Of course :3
I hope you have a wonderful day
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