The words we grow into

Poetic Dan

At the start you'll be praised

for every new sound and phase you use.

As time moves on, you'll find

this praise becomes more loose.

 

Slowly, you'll find those words

don't make as many smile like they once did,

until the praise becomes a reflection

that runs much deeper than you knew.

 

Waves of validation

suddenly mixed with battles of ego trips,

to be told those opinions once treasured

now create conflict.

 

Unmeasurable frequencies and energies

become a rhythm beneath the sea,

chaos rippling through the harmony,

hidden in a smile that says,

"Just let it be."

 

Life is a gift of tangled disbelief,

searching for a purpose in everything.

Change is inevitable—

sometimes it comes in a blink,

sometimes it feels like it isn't coming

until it hits.

 

The only option is to sink or swim,

learning who to let go

and who to let in.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 30th, 2026 06:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: 22 years of being a dad and I'm not afraid to ever tell it as it. We are all pure love when the journey begins, the test is to keep it and not let the others in. I'm sorry to all 4 of my children for my darkness but at least you get to see how well you'll do at this.
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  • sorenbarrett

    A lovely poem about a dark road. The message gets the fave on this one my friend. A father of four as well I send my condolences to all for the darkness but also the blessing of light of life that balances the darkness.



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