I decided
to jump out of the boat
just to see for myself
what all the fuss was
about...
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: August 4th, 2026 06:47
- Category: Reflection
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Teddy so good to hear from you and this poem leaves me with the question what all the fus was about myself. Metaphoric I would say one needs distance to understand. So short but a powerful concept my friend.
Thank you so much dearest sorrenbarret I'm still on the island, but I thought I'd come to see you. πΉ
You are most welcome Teddy and so glad you did
Brilliant little poem, Teddy. This made me laugh while simultaneously unsettling the hell out of me. Wonderful work, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
Ah, my work is done, lol I wondered if it would come out with humour too, thank you dearest Tristan, I'm still away, I'll be back soon π€£ πΉ thank you my dear friend. πΉ
That's what I say.
Shark infested waters, so what, they look cuddly.
It's a really dark hole π€£π€£
And what did you find π€hope it met up to your expectations π
I'm still at the bottom as it's grief I speak of, however I shall soon resurface with a huge amount of courage and strength π
Thatβs the spirit behind an empowered lady βοΈπwish you get to your destination soon π
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