The Abyss

Teddy.15

 
I decided
 
to jump out of the boat
 
just to see for myself
 
what all the fuss was
 
about... 
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  • sorenbarrett

    Teddy so good to hear from you and this poem leaves me with the question what all the fus was about myself. Metaphoric I would say one needs distance to understand. So short but a powerful concept my friend.

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you so much dearest sorrenbarret I'm still on the island, but I thought I'd come to see you. 🌹

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Teddy and so glad you did

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Brilliant little poem, Teddy. This made me laugh while simultaneously unsettling the hell out of me. Wonderful work, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

        • Teddy.15

          Ah, my work is done, lol I wondered if it would come out with humour too, thank you dearest Tristan, I'm still away, I'll be back soon 🀣 🌹 thank you my dear friend. 🌹

        • Paul Bell

          That's what I say.
          Shark infested waters, so what, they look cuddly.

          • Teddy.15

            It's a really dark hole 🀣🀣

          • NafisaSB

            And what did you find πŸ€”hope it met up to your expectations πŸ˜›

            • Teddy.15

              I'm still at the bottom as it's grief I speak of, however I shall soon resurface with a huge amount of courage and strength πŸ’œ

              • NafisaSB

                That’s the spirit behind an empowered lady βœŒοΈπŸ’wish you get to your destination soon 🌞

                • Teddy.15

                  πŸ’œ



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