autumn haiku, 2026

arqios

 

       autumn's small dark fruit
       a bowl set in late sunlight
            keeps the season whole

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    A poetic still life painting with metaphoric meaning (at least to me that sees metaphor in everything) the darkening of the season. Short but pregnant with meaning. A time of harvest.

    • arqios

      Dark but still fruit and life sustaining. Thanks, Soren πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

      • sorenbarrett

        Always most welcome

      • Thomas W Case

        Vivid and sharp.

        • arqios

          Many thanks dear Thomas πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

        • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

          a perfect snap shot

          • arqios

            Glad to hear. Thanks, dear Norman πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

            • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

              most welcome friend

            • orchidee

              A fine write A. Erm, what's that Y9 thingy? lol.

              • arqios

                It was a big mistake, O. Q was out for a smoko. πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

                • orchidee

                  I thought you meant K9 the dog! lol.

                  • arqios

                    So, it could be the feline in their majesty's service... ask Y and get 9 lives in reply... 007 has only got 2 left under his belt... or was it his holster?

                  • Kevin Hulme

                    It's the 'Late Sunlight' that speaks to me.
                    Of not wanting to let go. To keep the Autumn alive. Enjoyed.

                    • arqios

                      Yup. Once we settle in, it’s almost always time to go again! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                      Rik, this made me stop for a second and just look. Simple and damn near perfect. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

                      • arqios

                        Perhaps the Poconos has a mean autumn spread as well πŸƒ πŸ‚ 🍁

                      • arqios

                        Thanks for the fave @Franz Muller πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ€©

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Fine Haiku Rik.

                        Andy

                        • arqios

                          Thank you Andy πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

                        • NafisaSB

                          enjoy the fruits [of your labour?] - short and sweet haiku!

                          • arqios

                            Yes~ Quite rightly so. Thanks Safina πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

                          • Mutley Ravishes

                            My favorite season, and not favorite at the same time!

                            • arqios

                              I had that same thought... with Spring it's the pollen and other allergens that bug me... with autumn it's the dryness of the atmosphere. Can't have everything, I suppose.

                              • Mutley Ravishes

                                Michio Kushi said that the quality of the blood plays a big role in allergies etc. To help with this you could try out "Earthing," the Wim Hof breathing method, and last but not least, the early morning sunlight.
                                (I hope I`m not giving you "unsolicited advice" here as I know that makes some folks explode in rage!)

                                • arqios

                                  Oh I’ve been doing earthing and the early morning light! But still hinting down the best blankie to lie on as I’ve got a bad allergy to grass.



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